Post by saint on Dec 4, 2007 5:37:38 GMT -5
Saint: 'I truly have to ask you, do you really garner any pleasure out of what it is you do? Acting like some oh-so-cool narrator to the lives of all those around you, providing only so much emotional detachment to the events around you so you can actively critique what it is before you, like a movie-goer or oh so many beret-wearing art students that populate this planet.
You, no matter how hard you try to be real and original, are nothing more than another stock character out of a failed writers cliche bin, you're nothing more than a man who sees it fit to entertain those who surround him by trying to be as abstract as possible, yet by doing this, you leave yourself open to an attack.
Let me tell you what I've observed, firstly, you're a man who lacks the drive and the will to live his own life, and as such, he has become detached from the entire idea of life, and is instead content to just sit back and talk about those around him. You, as a person, lack the flair or the charisma to be befriended and adored by the people you work so hard to entertain, so your vanilla-persona has been tinted with a coating of bile, you've become angry to the society that rejected you, so instead, you stopped being a person and you become an omnipotent voice, high above, that sees fit to insult the people who you know, deep-down-inside, have more of a purpose to life than you do.
You have no purpose, so you insult other's for having something you lacked.
Now, this would be fine, if it wasn't for the fact that you are such a complete failure at this emotional-detatchment character you're trying to portray, nothing you say carries any semblance of thought, originality or comedy, yet it is obvious that you've tried hard to incorporate all three. At the same time, you try to retain this 'badass' aura through the way you speak, using vulgarity and even referring to women's hygiene products in an attempt to be considered funny, or, possible edgy. Of course, it was a complete failure.
You get an A for effort, but an F for actual completion of the task at hand, essentially, what I'm saying is that it was a valant effort, but you should really try something else, nothing too intricate, you obviously can't handle it, maybe try on the Psychotic Racist gimmick? That's up in popularity, these days. Or, you could take the tried, true, and Peter Saint endorsed path, and kill yourself.
Your choice.'
You, no matter how hard you try to be real and original, are nothing more than another stock character out of a failed writers cliche bin, you're nothing more than a man who sees it fit to entertain those who surround him by trying to be as abstract as possible, yet by doing this, you leave yourself open to an attack.
Let me tell you what I've observed, firstly, you're a man who lacks the drive and the will to live his own life, and as such, he has become detached from the entire idea of life, and is instead content to just sit back and talk about those around him. You, as a person, lack the flair or the charisma to be befriended and adored by the people you work so hard to entertain, so your vanilla-persona has been tinted with a coating of bile, you've become angry to the society that rejected you, so instead, you stopped being a person and you become an omnipotent voice, high above, that sees fit to insult the people who you know, deep-down-inside, have more of a purpose to life than you do.
You have no purpose, so you insult other's for having something you lacked.
Now, this would be fine, if it wasn't for the fact that you are such a complete failure at this emotional-detatchment character you're trying to portray, nothing you say carries any semblance of thought, originality or comedy, yet it is obvious that you've tried hard to incorporate all three. At the same time, you try to retain this 'badass' aura through the way you speak, using vulgarity and even referring to women's hygiene products in an attempt to be considered funny, or, possible edgy. Of course, it was a complete failure.
You get an A for effort, but an F for actual completion of the task at hand, essentially, what I'm saying is that it was a valant effort, but you should really try something else, nothing too intricate, you obviously can't handle it, maybe try on the Psychotic Racist gimmick? That's up in popularity, these days. Or, you could take the tried, true, and Peter Saint endorsed path, and kill yourself.
Your choice.'
