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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 12:47:16 GMT -5
Alright. With 2008 now in my grasp and the Caw creating bug hitting me, it's time that I started to show my work again. First for the showing is one of my more famed Caws, Michael Xavier(formally known as Cinder). And not far behind would be the other brother, Anthony Xavier Brothers at it again
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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 13:11:20 GMT -5
Thoughts so far?
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Shia Storm
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Post by Shia Storm on Nov 17, 2007 13:33:36 GMT -5
well, my opinion is that um. they look okay. The body morphing seems a bit off on anthony xavier, and on the tattoos. Could use some transparency. Maybe some knee pads on Mike
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Post by Amanda Wallace on Nov 17, 2007 13:38:55 GMT -5
Them boys got small.
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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 13:41:02 GMT -5
well, my opinion is that um. they look okay. The body morphing seems a bit off on anthony xavier, and on the tattoos. Could use some transparency. Maybe some knee pads on Mike What exactly looks off on him? As for the tat's, I did use transparcency. The fact that they over lap is whats causing part of them to be darker than normal. And Michael generally doesn't use knee pads.
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Jayceon Williams
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Post by Jayceon Williams on Nov 17, 2007 14:04:18 GMT -5
Cool. I agree though. Them boys did get smaller. lol
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Post by "Simply Sexy" Chris Calloway on Nov 17, 2007 14:14:34 GMT -5
Fix the figures they look unproportionate.
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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 14:24:47 GMT -5
Fix the figures they look unproportionate. I truly so LOVE vague comments like this. Anthony is fine the way he is. I like how he turned out. Michael is another matter that I'll look into at another time. I'm going for a slender/buff look, kind of like opposite of what Anthony is. I just don't know WHERE I need to fix it. So, if you have an idea, please by all means, suggest it. But don't leave vague comments like the one you did as they serve no real purpose in helping.
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Post by "Simply Sexy" Chris Calloway on Nov 17, 2007 14:27:17 GMT -5
Well since you asked for it:
Michael's chest looks too thin in comparation with his arms.
Anthony's arms are way too big and his chest is way too thin.
And don't get sarcastic with me, since I could have easily skipped your caws, now that would have been vague.
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Post by Amanda Wallace on Nov 17, 2007 14:31:09 GMT -5
Keep it civil... Lighten up Cinder's chest hair a bit though... He looks like the 40 year old virgin before he got wax jobbed
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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 14:35:06 GMT -5
Well since you asked for it: Michael's chest looks too thin in comparation with his arms. Anthony's arms are way too big and his chest is way too thin. And don't get sarcastic with me, since I could have easily skipped your caws, now that would have been vague. I agree with the chest. That's one thing I'm going to be working on. As for Anthony, I don't really see any changes that I need to do. MAYBE touch up his chest, but other than that, he's good. His arms have always been big. Now, don't get me wrong, I appreciate your suggestions, but just coming by and saying "fix the figures" is rather vague.
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Post by Amanda Wallace on Nov 17, 2007 14:41:17 GMT -5
Cabal's chest i think the height could be shrunk on. it's almost a ric flair flab chest look from this angle, IMO.
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Post by Guest on Nov 17, 2007 14:44:44 GMT -5
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Post by Guest on Nov 18, 2007 12:32:20 GMT -5
Seeing if this picture is any better... Well, it looks a bit better. If you guys wanna go a head and give tips on what could be fixed on him, I'm all ears.
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Post by Amanda Wallace on Nov 18, 2007 12:44:28 GMT -5
lighten his body hair and left arm tat. 40 is generally around where I sit for my tattoos.
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